Monday, September 25, 2023

day no. 16,408 continued... Hannah's Song: a poetic verse commentary of the Tyndale translation

In the Lord my heart rejoices
And my horn in Him is lifted
Sounding loud triumphant voices
Of salvation sweetly gifted

There is none, save Him, so holy
No, not one, like Him, unblemished
There is one, the Lord, the only
God and He, my strength, replenished

Talk not much, nor flaunt pretension
Let old things flee from your speeches
For the Lord, a proud intention,
Knows afar, yet judgment reaches

Broken are the bows of strong men
While the weak, endowed, are strengthened


All the full, whose fat was waxing,
Now are found hired out and hungry;
All the thin, whose toil was taxing
Now are round and rule the country

Babies born unto the barren;
Sevenfold in sum now rival:
Mothers boasting many children
Are, behold, now waxing feeble

Wicked ways, the Lord dispatches
Haughty hearts, to Hell, belittles;
Righteous faith, from death, He snatches
Humble thirst, with life, He victuals

Gives and takes away at leisure,
Sink or swim by His good pleasure


Men of dust, by grace, God raises
Lifts them up to sit with princes
Deep in dung, He draws their gazes
To their soul’s inheritances

All the earth and its dominions
Firmly perch on His foundation
Wicked men, by Him, are pinioned
Sainted souls soar to salvation

For no man, his might, can muster
Nor his nerve, survive contrary
To the Lord whose sky shall thunder
And whose scale shall judge the ending

To His King shall reign be given
And His horn resound decision!

— Hannah's Song
Postmillitant original rendering


*** based on Tyndale's translation of 1 Samuel 2:1-10

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